Story Title: Block B: The Last Girl Standing
Author: lilymilktea and ikaMozarella
Work of Fiction URL- http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/83963/
Reviewer: JonghyunJessica @ AsianFanfics
Thread: --c h o c o l a t e creams'
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Story Title [4/5]
The story title is relevant and it is not too clichéd. The title definitly catches the reader’s eye and get's the reader thinking and imaginating what the story would be like. Other than relevant, it's also interesting and captivating. (-1)

Foreword and Description [9/10]
The foreword and description are both attractive, short, and simple which makes a reader really want to read it. Reader's these days are getting lazy to read too much words. You even put questions in the description which makes a reader want to read it. You credited people who needed credit too and you put the genre, rating, and the day it started. (-1)

Poster/Trailer/Background [7/10]
It is pretty and yet amazing I should say. The background is catchy. It always best to use a shade that's a little darker than the poster for the background. But I have to say the background is better than the poster. Your poster is a little plain and light colored, it's too pale like. (-3)

General Story Plot [18/20]
The general plot of the plot was good. I enjoyed your story very much. It was a cute story. But the thing was, there are a lot other stories with pretty much the same idea as yours. (-2)

Character Portrayal [15/15]
You did protary your characters well. You put their picture, name, and described who needed to be described in the description. They were easy to relate to. You used the characters very well. (-0)

Grammar/Spelling [4/5]
Your spelling was quite good. A few typos here and there but was good. Your grammar in some chapters were perfect and then in the other chapters there would be a few errors here and there. Overall you used words very well. (-1)

Writing Style [5/5]
Your paragraph structures are very well. Simple and easy, yet attractive. Your vocabulary have very deep meanings in them which was well done in my opinion. (-0)

Originality [8/10]
Your idea let's say is common in stories on AsianFanfics. A lot of other stories have basically the same idea as yours. But I have to say, out of all those ideas that were similar to your's... your's was the cutest and funnest. (-2)

Captivating [9/10]
The story was entertaining and very funny... my smile would appear here and there and then I would laugh and my mom comes in my room thinking I'm a crazy fellow. (-1)

Flow and Entertainment [9/10]
It was entertaining. At first when I saw that there were 62 chapters I had to read... I seriously freaked out but I ended enjoying it. The flow was easy and smooth which I like. (-1)

*Bonus [3/5]
Funny story that made my day = 1 point
My mom coming in thinking I'm crazy because I was laughing = 1 point
Amazing character roles and great writing style = 1 point (+3)

Total [91/100]
A = 85% - 100%